Or4nges's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[-Glorious morning-]

D:!!!

Does anyone know where you can find a decent orchestral soundpack like this one?

As for the song, I love it. Never stop making music, waterflame :)

[Pokemon G/S Lance Battle Final]

Love.

Epic on so many levels.

Are those drums programmed? or recorded.

If programmed, I'd LOVE to know what soundpack/soundfont you're using :D

Burn7 responds:

They are indeed programmed. I use XLN Audio's Addictive Drums. It's the best one I've seen so far.

[LQ - Climb]

Why?

does this only have a 0.70? this isn't even close to making my ears bleed.

Although it definately could have used some more pads and layers, it wasn't half bad.

You had some dissonance in your chord progression. You might want to take away some detune on your piano and some other synths to make it all mesh a little better.

Kept the main idea through the entire song, which isn't a bad thing, but you may want to branch out to a few other ideas here and there if you ever decide to work more on this song. It had an almost constant feel of 'rising action' but it never really hit a climax. ALSO there was no ending :/ You best finish it.

Not bad, but needs work. The melodies were solid.

Mind checking out a song or two of mine? I'd appreciate it :)

[[Odd] Second - Final]

Jumpy.

I agree and disagree with alot of what the guy below me said.
Yes I feel the saw at :40 should definately have added more to the song rather then just copypasta'd the melody. Also yes, your melody could use a wider range of ntoes, but you were going for a generic techno song, and you nailed the generic melody lol.
However, I think the keychange wasn't a bad thing. it was a little refreshing, but you could have just switched up the chord progression instead. And yes the piano in the background had a few sour notes. They worked once you changed key, but at 1:30 it clashes with the lead.
Also the transition at 2:30 needs alot of work, it's kind of painful :)
And 2:40 is begging for more bass.

Mainly just fix your intonation problems, add more variety, and you'll have a polished generic techno song.

Keep at it!

I'd like it if you checked out some of my stuff as well :)

[{Hollow Man} Remastered]

Meh.

I like your other version better. I feel this one lost some of its.. charm.

I do however think the ambient background noises and the transitions were improved. I just prefer the original mix.

[XS - The Missing Piece]

Love.

The piano melody is inspiring.

However I feel like some slow and sparse wubwubs in the bass could really add to the song. (and also truly make it dubstep)

But as is it is still a very deep, emotional peice. Thankyou for uploading.

[A Forlorn Hope]

Energetastic

Although I do feel like it could use a break in the drums every minute or so. the one at 3:00 was a good start, but a few really short ones would be nice to break the monotony.

Also the transition at 3:40 could use a swell. Would help the energy flow imo

But other than that, great track. all the melodies were great.

[Forever Ndeavor]

Whoa snap.

I like this alot, it pregresses PERFECTLY, really picks up towards the end, and then fades slowly into an ominous nothingness.

I agree with the guy below me, the intro was dragged on a bit, but honestly, what trance song isn't? :P Plus you threw in enough variation to make it worth hearing.

All your transistions were flawless. there weren't really times when things were just BAM! there. It all slowly fades in until you notice, "Hey theres strings over here!" and "Oh look, a shaker in the right headphone!"

It all came together seamlessly, well done.

Nfinity responds:

Thanks! I really appreciate the positive feedback. At first I was just a little disappointed that the song was receiving 0's and 1's, but yours and sjs00's review made it completely worth it! I also appreciate the critical input, along with your observations. It's amazing what you guys notice.

Most of all, thanks for listening to the song in its entirety. With everyone's attention span ranging from 5-10 seconds anymore (I'm merely stating that as a universal fact, not a bash to Newgrounds), it's refreshing when people display any form of patience.

Nfinity

[Crusty Rode]

fdbjsfbnajk.

The middle part makes me happy. lol

This song could really use a proper ending. So far I love it.